With all the talk about gun bans and assault rifles in the news these days, it started me to thinking about violence. If you’re reading this, you’re most likely a writer (practicing or wishing you were) and, much less likely, a serial killer, say. But maybe you’ve been considering writing about a serial killer. A friend of mine is writing a novel about a thief, one who generally gets into the house and out before anyone is any the wiser. Or hurt. Our thief, however, does have some interesting and very undesirable friends. I mean really nasty in salacious and weird ways. But I love reading about them, especially as they aren’t main characters, just the ones you stare at as you’re following the main action.
I tend to edit violence out of my stories. Or work around it. Like sex, I figure it’s not easy to write a good death or rape scene, should my character even be involved in one. I have had a young character killed by a good friend. (You’ll have to read it when the story’s finally published.) A detective had to tell his mother what happened to her son. It wasn’t pretty, but at least I needed only to provide the “highlights.” I’m not sure how I would’ve handled it “in scene.”
The choice to limit violence in my writing is my own, and it’s not to say that I avoid novels that are filled with such mayhem. I absolutely adore the initial books in the Jason Bourne series (books 1-3 actually written by Robert Ludlum), and Man Booker Prize winner Hilary Mantel filled Wolf Hall with all kinds of Tudor tortures. (I’ll let you know about Bring Up the Bodies, but look at that title!)
I like this bit by Bonni Goldberg (see here, if that link continues to have a problem) in Room to Write:
“In both film and literature, violence can be portrayed through characterization rather than action; for instance, tone of voice, silence in the face of need, facial expressions, attitude, even the way a person eats. They bring the force of violence to light without sending the audience into shock. How you portray violence in your own writing reflects the ways it has the greatest impact on you.”
Have an opinion on violence in writing? How do you treat it in your own work?
January 17, 2013 at 12:01 pm
I’ve often considered this very topic. I think it boils down to the intentions of both the reader and the author.
Nothing I’ve read could compel me to act outside my own moral code. However, I also avoid horror and gross violence (in books or movies) because these themes disturb me too much. What concerns me is the idea that like is drawn to like. It explains why pacifist me doesn’t like violence. But the reverse has also proven true. It troubling to think some sicko pores over scenes shopping for ideas.
The way an author handles the violence has impact, too. Is violence “condoned” by the premise or plot? Is it so prevalent as to desensitize? Or, is violence a foil to develop some social ideology or character(s) moral integrity?
It’s an interesting topic. Well worth discussion. Thanks for the good read, Laura!
January 17, 2013 at 1:43 pm
You’re welcome, Gail. With so much going on these days, the topic seems unavoidable.